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the movement during the opener wasn't that bad at all, but why did you go for the grab right away. going for a grab after the opener is basically saying "I couldn't control myself so I pull Uke closer to me".

the movement is fine. I don't have anything major to say about it. the split was really weird though. the hit didn't look solid in the slightest unfortunately. what contributed to that was how you extended the knee late and hit with your thigh.

since you said you were gonna edit from the split, I won't bother with the rest of the replay. good luck with it.
oh yeah
Well, scrap that. I could't get any good shoryukens with that
http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...&postcount=327
Another replay I made.
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cnc'ing radioactive in the potato: The opener was pretty good, not amazing though. The first dm wasn't that impressive, it was badly aimed, however you got 2 dm's out of it though. The decap didn't look too stylish, I thought it looked weird, you got a possible boomhit, but you didn't aim too well. The pose was too floatish. gg nagato.
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Okay guys, i expect atleast one piece of cnc by tomorrow.
Of not, I will pm some guys to criticise :o
Don't make me do that. I'm lazy
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Originally Posted by NINJABALLZ View Post
I actually like the flow of your latest replay.

Well... Thanks

Bitches give me my criticism already. I can't love off of just this.
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I viewed that replay last week and I wanna see if I remember anything of it.
The opener cork spin thingy was fine, till the first dm, it didn't ruin your flow or anything it just looked pretty bad to me. The grab transition to make uke turn looked bad, however it ledd to you grabbing again, but also led to you getting a good hit.
The pose was okay.
6.8/10.
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