Your designs are really intricate and it's admirable to see someone put this much effort in their work. I love how every little element in your designs connect with one another, it's how i make my stuff too.
My favourite one would probably be papa dwarf. I only wish that the whole page was filled, or if it was focused more on one side than the other. You know, rule of thirds and stuff. That aside, cool stuff.
nice use of contrast and decent linework with the pens.
definitely good doodles, but lacking in actual drawing technique.
has the same problems as the "surrealist" stuff you've posted in the past.
try planning just a little and combining your good use of contrast, with actual gradients and contouring. give it some real depth.
composition and placement comes with practise.