The opener was a bit slow but good.
The first boom was one of those "off".booms, it was mostly on the right side the ukes chest. It would have been nice if you got both pecs and chest.
The second boom was very good!
The transtion to the pose was stiff, but the pose was good.

8/10

Can you edit the first post to put all the replays on there ? I'm a little dizzy with this xD

But I liked all what I seen (page 1 2 & 3)
Pretty Awesome! I will use some of that for a new video

Llama in the moon

Great replay.
Good opener.
Amazing flow, and boomhits.
Ending pose was a bit lulzy, but it was still good.
You deserve a 9.5/10.

Good work overall.

thx man! also no latin. its too many replays to post it in first post.

Like said before, the opener took a bit too long, but I loved that punch.

The transition from the grab to kick looked alright, the kick was great but the dm should all happen at the same time or close to look nicer.

Pose was silly. In a good way of course :P

8.5/10

First time I've seen you and I like it. Keep it up

Nice to see comment like this one. So here is new one. And if some1 will comment it pls draw something more that "opener its something, split its something skeet its blah blah blah..."

It was really great
There was a moment at the end and i was like this needs a skeet and there it was:P
Really good job 10/10

Opener was really cool.
Dm's and booms also.
Really liked how you Dm'd Uke with his head.
Pose was good.

9/10

hours dude read what i draw in post where i put the replay

Thats my kind of giving CnC.
Ok, another formulation.


Your flow was great.
The booms and dismembers was good but could've been a little bit stronger.
Some parts were a little bit stiff but all other stuff was fine.
The way you can self dm Uke like that are really, really cool.
The way you pose is good but could be better with more right up standing.


Better?