Heya there Araky boy.
Alrighty. The opener was stiff. Really, really stiff. Also, you shouldn't hold the same position without moving any of your joints for too long...unless you're moving fast. Than it can be ok.
The launch and the spin were alright. Bit generic. You should have relaxed your arms a bit while spinning though.They looked quite stiff.
The hits were solid. Your DMs are really nice overall. No complaints there. Gee gee.
Transition to pose was alright. Stiff, but alright.
Overall, you should try to work on your smoothness. Don't be afraid to relax your joints that you're not using. Your hits are really nice but your movement needs a bit of polishing.
Cheers. C: