As much as i hate to bump this thread up again, no offence, you're posting here for a totally
wrong reason. The only reason why a video maker would post here would be to improve,
and people telling you, your video is bad or good wont help you do that.
If people do tell you its bad, most of the time, they'll post why its bad.
Read what people say, it might help you.
Just a suggestion.

Not bad words.