Oh wow, that was one amazing video. At first I thought "Wow I wish I knew who each replay was by, I can't tell by sets" and then you went and added some awesome credits. The transitions from one person to another was brilliant, your video was mind blowing from start to finish.
its nice, but you need freecam to use better transitions, fading into white all the time is boring, although since it is your first video, and you used sony vegas pro, your overall rating from me is 7/10.