The end is definitely lacking. Everything up to the split was awesome, sweet flow great movement, but then after the split you sort of lacked it for a second. Through most of the replay you were really spinning and fast, but when you went in for the grab you were really smooth and long movements.
It's like you changed your style halfway through. Also, the decap was weak, you definitely could've gotten some amazing dms on the chest there.
Other one was okay I guess, nothing amazing but still nice.
Get that full chest boom m8.