Ok, first thing I'm gonna say is that I'm loving it so far mocu!
There are a few things which I don't like, but the overall theme is really good.
My qualms are pretty minor details, so yeah, nothing major but:
- The font - Not a huge fan of the font, although it's far from a bad choice. Something more standard could look cool, although the graffiti style really suits the theme well.
- The Grammar - Something that usually comes out from your videos is that you're not a fluent english speaker (not at all a bad thing) but there are a few small errors that I think need to be fixed if possible:
Correct the name - It says UrbanUnt at the moment.
Where it says "proudly presents you", it should say "proudly presents"
You mispelt eyCoco, it doesn't have a 2nd e after the y.
This is a teeny tiny thing but capital letters on the names :P Not a problem, but it'll drive my OCD crazy
- Not a huge fan of the shakey letters, makes it a bit hard to read, and given the fast-ish pace, taking it all in can be a struggle.
- As for missing people, not sure if we managed to gather replays from people like echomarine, ashaltaf, saintowar or ghassan, I'm pretty sure we managed to find a few of their replays :s
- Also, when you get into the main swing of the video, I dislike the lack of blood, but that's just me.
Other than those few details, I'm really loving the overall style and theme of the video.
If you want to carry on your style of intro for the missing members, you could loop that small bit by cutting the hits that you use for the intro and repeating them some more? I think that's possible in vegas, although I'm not sure.
Either way, I'm really hoping that that doesn't come across as too... critical?
Just trying to help, but it's awesome so far Mocu.
Th3Crazy: Your video was ok but I saw very little sync... And given you chose to use Madeon's Icarus song, I'd think that's a pretty major part, especially for the intro. Nice job though!
Powas: Posting wips means we can cnc it, so you can know what we want, which means you increase your chances of winning ;o
Great jobs guys, can't wait to see the finished/rest of the projects <3
Last edited by Erth; Jan 17, 2013 at 06:03 PM.