blood final ver:
ok,i really didnt liked the twitches you do on the whole replay,but the opener looks great
the first kick was nice,punch wold be better if had dm'ed the other glute as well.
however,from now on things started to look weirder:
-first,the boom of pecs and head was nice,however it wasnt that clean to see.
-there didnt looked to have any kind of transition to the other dms
-the kick,again,unclean to see,also,wold dismember alot of more joints there
but last dm kick was nice,and hand fall was ok.
Bumblen00b collab:
i can tell exality from where starts both parts
but eh,i can see some twitches
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try to work on more movements,sometimes you dont look to have flow.
also,avoid twitching,you know,when a "fast move" happens for one frame,like a move-stop-move in one frame.