Hi.

The opener got you the movement you needed, even if it wasn't the prettiest.
I like the clean hits, especially the decap kick. Really like that kind of hits where you ungrab right before it.
I would have enjoyed some variety though, chest hits are kinda getting old, atleast for me.
The pose was great, it's not common and it's stable. Nice one.

Replay.

http://forum.toribash.com/torireplay...20awesome2.rpl

The opener and first hit were nice, I liked them for some reason.
Really liked the foot grab there, but the split looked a bit weak to me. I would have enjoyed more something like a core hit.
The last hit was ok, it felt more like filler than anything, but not bad in any way.
Pretty nice pose too.
Cool replay, but I feel like most people wouldn't enjoy it.

I may have died but I got better.

I'm happy to see you get better at destruction The neck left untouched kinda bothers me, ach.
The opener was super simple but I do that all the time so I won't even give you crap for it.
I'm surprised you managed to get the crotch boom because the angle and aiming were not the best. Nice job on that.

Disregard the former replay for I have made it better.

Here's a replay you ungrateful little shits.

>:c