Toribash
Gosh darn golly gee wizz sir. I suppose I bothered you enough about cncing my replay
that I can return the favor.

I just love the replay overall, the style/movement is just so solid.
Anyway, the opener was nice, pretty standard, likin' the spin.
the punch looked solid, the kick as well. I like the transition to/
the kick, looked rather nice, and the skeet looked pretty cool,
was fast. The pose was great, nice to see you got over your twitching
problem.

the replay was a tad generic but still nice, good job.
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wow that
sucked
Well, the first punch could be aimed better i guess.
The boom was pretty unique and clean, kinda liked it.
The last kick was pretty good too.
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Pretty good

Opener was alright. really loved that kick though, punch looked very weak.

the back kick was alright, but it was a tad bit slow for my liking.

Next kick looked cool, but I'd like to see a cleaner or bigger boom, because that angle is perfect.

Skeet was nice and quick, and the pose was pretty good.

* you should check out mah replay thread
Last edited by MrJingles; Feb 1, 2013 at 10:17 PM.
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thanks guys.

I was getting sad for a while.

Here's another little collab with me and Dobby. He wanted someone to edit his first kick (sent it through skype) annnd.... well, I ended up finishing the whole replay :I. Instead of just the kick.

My version sucks.
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[collab]- M- Rawbeds.rpl (500.7 KB, 21 views)
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the goblin
Opener was slow as fuck in the beginning. Dam uke.
Nothing special with the manipulation, too simple but it was like you wanted to juggle the hole uke.
Not really impressive hits... Well some hits were unclean and the last hit was weak...
You are better than that!
*May I request CnC?
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The manip was not that great, the only good part was after Uke got some speed.
The hits were pretty good though, but I didn't like how you grabbed for three whole hits, it looks wierd.
The last hit and pose looked really good though.
quite a big twitch at 973, you got hit my uke at 858 which almost never looks good, 832-750 was very awkward overall, you barely tapped uke with your toe on the first hit and completely froze in there air making the hit seem substantially weaker than it actually was, the hit at 634 was quite odd due to you landing directly on your head at the same time, the last hit would of been a good ending to the replay, chasing uke for the last dm seemed to stretch the replay out a bit too far

10/10 I LIEK THE BOOMHITS
Last edited by millie; Feb 7, 2013 at 11:02 AM.