You need some more work.
Try shorter test videos. With each video you get better, so the shorter your videos the faster you can learn methods to improve. Also, don't post the short videos.
not first and
my toribash is slow cause of my laptop i cant see the word on the bottom saying press space button to play!
cause of small screen thats why its slow
im still working on a new vid
2bros and 1friend
music is still alive from the game portal