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Rob's Replay Thread
Alright as the thread says this is my replay thread, Please CnC.

Rob- Art of Orkology.rpl
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Last edited by Dobby; Feb 27, 2012 at 01:30 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
That opener was sexy really good.

But I didn't like the first hit, looked awkward, but the flip was cool, and the kick was decent.

The second kick was also really good, and so was that punch.

But overall the flow could be better, and for the end pose try relaxing your arm instead of lowering it, it looked really bad.

Overall great, but somethings need a good tweaking. 8.6/10
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I dunno why but that opener hit the spot for me. I really like it.

I don't know what happened with the first hit.
Damn girl?! Nice pawnch.
Bad bad bad bad... don't jump with your armz.
Bad bad bad bad... don't kick with your shins.
Although it was nice at normal speed.
Good control to pose.
Nice pose.

I like your relaxed style, I love your speed, really nice fluidity, generally decent power and decent balance.

8/10



Melancholy verse.

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That was messy... um, Ravishing replay ma man.. no mistakes.. s'all good.. 11/10

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Last edited by Muffin; Jun 9, 2012 at 01:55 PM.
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Originally Posted by TheMuffinMan View Post
I dunno why but that opener hit the spot for me. I really like it.

I don't know what happened with the first hit.
Damn girl?! Nice pawnch.
Bad bad bad bad... don't jump with your armz.
Bad bad bad bad... don't kick with your shins.
Although it was nice at normal speed.
Good control to pose.
Nice pose.

I like your relaxed style, I love your speed, really nice fluidity, generally decent power and decent balance.

8/10

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No.^

Rob, you're really progressing with your new style. The arm jump was okay in concept but it really did not look that great, the opener was interesting to say the least, very twitchy though. Please start working on your flow, the edit button is your friend.