The opening run had some cool ideas, but they just weren't executed perfectly.
that little step on the wall really could've been something awesome. The jump was pretty meh, too stiff.
Loved the entire part from 1600 onwards. Great transition down to the pillar, sweet cork. The backwards flare kick probably could've been executed better, but it was still a great idea. The little push off the wall to get to the ground was sweet too, I feel like if you ever continued this, you could definitely front-flip off that wall to keep going.
P good shit, some of your tricks, like the front flip at the start, were executed poorly, but still; cool ideas in there.