Well it's not bad for a start. It looked like you completely ignored your arms during the running segments, and your limbs occasionally scraped the ground when you were trying to set up for a trick or something like that. Other than what seems to be an inability to properly climb up ledges, all of that stuff will smooth itself out with practice. Keep at it.
Good job, I remember when I was in your game and you were doing parkour, on the same mod, looks like you've improved, or I havent seen you parkour much.