Toribash
Original Post
Add some spice- The legs when you were running looked a little stiff, and needs loosening. Try to prepare your punch a little further before you reach uke, so you can make it more powerful, but the punch itself was a bit slow, but good. Try to avoid getting your head hit from uke's upper body after you punched him. Everything else was good and smooth, but you could probably make the decap look more powerful. I liked the breakdance-type move when you split uke's legs.

Gentle touch- Your opener was a bit random and slow. It would probably look better if you contracted your glutes more before you kicked him. The double kick was good, but try to make it look a bit more realistic, other than twitching. I liked the boom, it was smooth and clean.