Ok, so recently I tried to do my first madman. After many edits,these are the results. These are both the same replay except the the first one got the decap and the second one has a better ending pose+more points of damage. Any criticism is appreciated.

BlockyBlockyBlockyBlockyBlockyBlocky thats should say enough, get more smoothness in then

not bad for a first try.

+First
+you maintain a good DM speed

-Relax all. it looks better.
-You could DM alot faster.

I'll give you a 7/10.

Not really that blocky, i dont see what you're trying to say.

Seeing that i get 8.5's + Ill give you a 7/10. I liked your 1st one. Your dismembers are close-ish and you keep an okay flow.

Thanks for the criticism. So by blocky, do you mean not fluid or limp enough?

Like, you're all stiff and your movements jutter, just make it flow.

Well, I tried a second time, but I don't think the result was that much different. I'll probably try again and relax all much more often. Anyways,I think this one is better than my first one. Also, if you look closely, I moved Uke's leg accidentally after it has been dismembered. When I finally noticed it, it was too late so I'm sorry about that.

Hey, that wasn't a bad attempt.
Seeing its a first madman, I give you 9/10 =)

But try have some speed in it, using momentem as your aid. =)

Cool, that's the highest rating I've ever gotten. I took a break from madmans for a while so here are some of my decaps.