Yes.....very nooby.
I don't even know the basics of the card designs.
Go ahead and tell me whats completely wrong with it.
(This took me about 7 hours to make)

^^^^^Toribash logo :P (Hard to see)

The shoe thing is the card type: Speed or Running.
You should get the basic idea in this card about what
my personality is.

I still have the parts of the card in seperate files so I
can edit them and make them better based on the C&C
I get.

What do you guys think about it?
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Updated Card (V2):

Added more info and made the colors more appealing.

Dude this is fukin sik as did u draW tHE kitchen? 9/10

i think its pretty cool, although it has some text missing. this card suggests you practically are a meal, you might want to add some more stuff about yourself. it overall looks epic, i dont know why you called it nooby. keep up the good work!

I got the kitchen from google images.
I just looked up 3d kitchen because a picture of a
normal kitchen's detail wouldn't match with my tori.
There's no way I could draw something as detailed as the kitchen.
XD

E: Thanks GK. :P

its coo, youre some kind of chef
this is my ooooooooold one,

Boredpayne Moderated Message:

Make your own thread for your own art, don't post it here. Warned.

Hey man what size do u use for the image?

9.5/10 ;)

*Bump*
Added upgraded Card!
Made it more colorful and descriptive.

It is pretty cool but I think that you should have one that shows you doing a boom hit on Uke

Pretty awesome, but I think you should consider taking the screenshot of your tori with shaders or raytracing on next time, just to add the little bit of shine (: