You keep changing the fonts and layouts of the dialouge, this feels like a big sin in terms of organization/symmetry (not sure if that use of the word applies here.) It wasnt necesary considering everyone had their own colored name and usually 8 times out of 10 their own camera angle with them in it.

The camera angles were alright. "UkeBot" falling off the building was a great touch. However if they are robots and the fully upgraded robot sees in a purplish tint, why doesnt the ukebot see in this color? Just a small continuity error that bothered me. If you managed to get everyone into the same shot on the parkour scene it would have looked more realistic. When someone says "lets go guys" they mean lets all walk or run to the same destination, not follow the leader.

Incorporating all of them into the shot from a birds eye view when the "leakers" (I think) dropped down was a great touch. One of the better camera angles in the film.

Removing those slideshow dialogue moments was also one of the better things about the film. Everything felt like a movie for once.

IMO you should add in a credit roll because you are branching out on all these other creators for your films. I think you used over 10+ people for resources and didnt add in a credit roll.

The music was fitting. Might have sounded a tad overdone at some points but it fits.

The story progresses fairly quick. Once again, there werent any moments where the whole scene stops for dialogue. While the scene for the leakers coming down was actually well made, it didnt quite make sense. I was wondering the whole time why they got into attack mode.

This is one of the main things that can make or break the film. The modding is essentially one of the biggest aspects to a film like this because it is the setting. it is the creation of the environment and the scene.

There was only one mod on the whole thing that actually caught my attention in a good way. The mod on 4:25 was actually good, Ive never seen it before but the colors fit the emotion and scene very well. Good job on whoever made it.

Most of the mods I saw in the whole thing had that clipping error. it bothered me immensely. The scene with Ukeko completely threw me out of it. It ruined the immersion when that brown piece in the middle started flickering, and this is only one of my problems because its completely avoidable by setting the x/y or z by .01 thicker.

Some stiffness here and there. not going to say names, but some of the people on the film looked unrealistic when running. Wallrunning was absolutely a problem with all of them. Everyone looked too low to the ground when setting up moves.