Well, the split was nice. I think you could have relaxed a few more joints and contracted the elbow sooner to give it a more fluid feel and probably a bit more umph. The decap I wasnt so hot on. After slowing it down I noticed that your arm ghosted through your leg...not a HUGE deal, but not really cool either. Also it was grabby, and hard to tell what actually caused the decap.
It WAS a creative replay though, and I think with a bit more tuning, it could be a really good one.