Well I think I will start again but with -30 gravity replays.

So here I start.

Ngg, The opener was kinda cool but newbie move lol, then you were stiff.
The boom was pretty cool, looked kinda powerful.
The punch was alright, nothing special.
And the set ut for the pose was twitchy.

Mm well.

Bump.

Still adding a new better replay.

The split in Chicky seemed a bit weak, but it is 30- so it was still okay.

You looked pretty controled.

Nice simple replay, Pat.

Well, nice balanced that you got there.
But your movement were stiff somewhere.
And the decap was pretty cool, the split looked ok.

Opener looked too unnatural and stiff and the movement was just too boring and slow. Where's the action?
Also avoid hitting uke when he's on the ground.

Alright.
Some kind of super skeet.

opener was slow, didnt like that.
Liked how you got your wrist and the decap looked broing cuz u use ground impact.
The skeet was kinda powerful.
Pose was really cool.

Try to make it more relaxed, there would be more motion in there, and look alot better.

Bumping with a new replay.