here is my first reply. a little bit stiff but what do u think?

hm pretty nice 4 ya first try
but it sucks that u lose ur head and both arms
the rest is ok
i will giva ya a 7
try 2 relax more

actually i wanted to lose my head XD

Well, Dismembering yourself always looks bad, try not to that.
Try to be more creative, that opener doesnДt uses relax(relax always makes the replay look good)

Ill give it a 4/10

I have to disagree with you there. If you've ever seen eny of CheZda's really decent replays (in Moop's latest 2 videos), you will notice he uses hold all for a lot of openers, dancing and Uke-pounding, and it looks amazing. Relax does not always make a replay better. Sure, it looks more fluid, but sometimes holding certain joints makes a move look more precise and powerful.

Well, i dindДt saw MoopДs latest vids, but ill try to see it.

Anywayz, i guess your right when u say that holding certain joints makes the move look more precise and powerful, but in this particular case that opener lacks quality...

my 2nd video. i was trying to relax more. hope u enjoy it

nice u improved a lot
7 / 10
tip : hit him harder^^

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