Just gonna put this in the Multiplayer board.
And while I'm at it, i'll give you some cnc for that one :]
After a slow start it actually got quite interesting to watch.
After he (I'm sure accidently) ran away you made a great, fast comeback and i can see you tried to make it realistic when you got hit.
When you set up for jumps, i was surprised, they were always very quick, perhaps rushed in places?
I do that all the time when sparring too, not that i spar much, but when i go to do a jump, i get go fever when i could do with waiting a few more turns to get in position.
some of the landing were pretty good, it's something i find tricky to get the hang of nd your kicks were good.
If i were to suggest thing to improve it'd be to try and stop that "jump fever", improvise a new starter, that one's often used and can make the start rather slow, as i said.
Also with your landing, maybe try and get a more upright position if possible, i know it's hard but when it's done you can then try some running again as opposed to jumping, which can look really nice.
EDIT: Also, near the start i notice you extend your elbows and knees for long periods of time, that can sometimes look a tad sloppy when sparring due to the realism nature of the replay. might wanna relax up a bit ;]
Last edited by Erth; Sep 1, 2012 at 03:31 PM.