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Why undead hates uke
hi here is my 3rd ever replay attempt. i have previously been told to attempt more dms. so in this one theres more and ... yeah

i hope u enjoy leave feedback. and remember only my 3rd ever replay!


undead

:EDIT will any1 watch this?
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No, nobody wil ever watch it.

That was damn good for 3rd replay ever. Although the opener was a bit symmetrical, but you did good things with it.
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2 words:noob symmetry.

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Very good for a 3rd replay,you have much potential in my opinion. You put good use to the opener,but try not to move uke, by that I mean click his joints. Try not to grab alot.
Strictly a replay maker with a LOW amount of tc. (;
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