oh man, I really appreciate your comment
first of all your stuff is awesome, I can't wait to hear more
secondly, I completely understand the transition issues... as I said on one of my other songs they're like my kryptonite as a composer. I'll really try to work on things like that a I go on. And yes, I really like piano now that I've started composing for it; it seems to flow easier since it sounds more realistic than most of the crappy voices on noteworthy composer.
also, I can understand the dissonance issue; I have a weird thing for actually liking it too much, so it might come off bad to others... I might have to get used to that in the future xD
again, thank you so much for your comment, I hope to upload more songs later