Well, it's very sloppy and there doesn't look like there was much effort put into it.
First off, the shading is really bad and doesn't make sense at all. Some shadows are going one way while the others go a different way.
The way it is now, there would have to be several different small light sources all over his face.
The line work needs a redo as well, it's extremely crude and messy.
Not to mention the obvious, but you just overlayed a bucket fill texture for the rest of the head which is extremely lazy.
I guess if you are just starting out, it's reasonable, but i suggest you go back to the drawing board and practice a lot.