Toribash
You grabbed way to much and the replays were rather messy. Try to maintain your distance somewhat so you can get momentum and to allow yourself room to move. Also, try to relax any joints that you aren't using. This usually makes the replay look nicer and also in the majority of cases allows you to do more. Another thing you did was when you grabbed Uke, you immediately moved your arm in the opposite direction of the momentum. This makes the movement look awkward and jerky, as opposed to fluid and nice.

So it wasn't too bad just keep practising.
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