Toribash
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Empire's replays
Let's see how long this will be.

Please comment, and tell me what I should improve on.
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Just fly with it.rpl (115.6 KB, 24 views)
Rainbowdash
Call me lLlLlLlLl because I spit straight bars when i rap or call me $tr8B@rz
Anyyways.

Opener was too simple. The whole replay was too grabby, and some of the kicks you made were weak. I loved the second kick though, but I think you could've boomed it. Overall replay was stiff and grabby, but had good speed + momentum.
yeah ok
Well, same as above, u should start with higher EngageDistance, and do some cool tricks at the start, and yeah, it was too stiff too at some parts, try to make a replay without grabs, and stay that destructive like in this replay, you will see the difference.

6/10 for now
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Here's a replay I recently just made.

Please rate and comment on this one two, I wanted to get more dm's but the time... so I just had to hurry up and pose
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Its not my day.rpl (137.9 KB, 16 views)
Last edited by EmpireSlay; Feb 13, 2011 at 07:22 PM.
Rainbowdash
Call me lLlLlLlLl because I spit straight bars when i rap or call me $tr8B@rz
The replay looked good for about 80 frames, but then it just went downhill. The walking was twitchy, you were stiff, and it looked like you were trying too hard with all of that movement. Loosen up, and add a lot more destruction to your replays - two dismemberments in a 750 frame madman is not good. You were flopping around in the last 300 frames to get into a weak pose, which made the replay look ugly.

Sorry if it seems harsh, but 4/10.
[Urban] | Ormo | Team Sambo

I'm taking offers for my set
How's this just made this roughly about 5-15 mins.

Please comment, and dont be afraid to rape me.
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Gay and Proud.rpl (165.6 KB, 9 views)
Rainbowdash
Call me lLlLlLlLl because I spit straight bars when i rap or call me $tr8B@rz
It's nice mate.
But nobody wants to see an attack that didn't actually hit anything, I reccomend changing that, also I would use more relax and do more tricks and such, but the momentum you've got is pretty nice.

6.5/10 for now.
Gamer Of Gamers
Just in time before, a week.

Check out my new replay.

I tried to make a second just taking off th torso, but I kinda failed..., and didn't want to try anymore cause I already accomplished what I wanted...a bit bummed I onyl got 3 dms.

CnC please...
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Jerkk it off.rpl (80.5 KB, 5 views)
Rainbowdash
Call me lLlLlLlLl because I spit straight bars when i rap or call me $tr8B@rz
Bump-Edited Just fly with it, and named it Freakout 1.2

please comment, and rate.

I hate you all. :U
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Freakout 1.2.rpl (112.4 KB, 5 views)
Rainbowdash
Call me lLlLlLlLl because I spit straight bars when i rap or call me $tr8B@rz