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[art]My first Signature
Ive been doing Photoshop for a couple months now, and I decided to take my shot at a "signature." Next I wanna try to make a head :3


Please gimme your opinion, thanks

I'm 12 years old btw

I uploaded an alternate version. Which is better?
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My First Signature Zebas.jpg (20.1 KB, 66 views)
Version 2.jpg (20.2 KB, 28 views)
Version 3.jpg (19.7 KB, 38 views)
Last edited by Zebas; Sep 28, 2012 at 11:03 PM.
ok.. it's your first sign... and you still have alot to learn ^^

i suggest you to follow some tutorials... there are alot of good tutorials if you search on google

btw your vote... right now... is 3/10
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Looks okay, I'm not a fan of the colour combination though. Or the pose.
That effect that made the tori look like a plate was really wierd.
oh yeah
Originally Posted by Zebas View Post
What's wrong with it?

i know it's your first signature... anyway i'll be hard... but to help you to improve.. i do not have anything againts you ^^

well..
the lightings is really weird... they are usually shine alot... and they aren't "greish"

the light is completely wrong: if the light source of the tori is right behind him, you cannot place the light source on his left =/

let's not talk about depth and flow...

the colors are really bad... remember to use the colors of your render (mostly)

the details are blurry in some places (all arround the lighting)

the text is completely wrong... do not use any text unless you are sure you will place in the right position using the right font

the image is saved as JPG... NEVER... and i repeat.. NEVER DO IT! the quality drops drastically... so save every signature you make as PNG ^^


i hope that helped you
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Thanks, and it's PNG, and I uploaded an alternate version at an effort to fix most of thew stuff you said. How is it?