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Join Date: May 2008
Sep 7, 2008
Ami's madman
The first madman that I've completed, criticism wanted.
Self critique:
I dislike the opener.
Not enough fluidity.
More mad, less methodical destruction.
Second to last kick is sloppy.
Last kick should have taken out the hip, not the knee.
Again, please leave criticism so I can get better. Thanks: Amilir.
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nice
So, your probably reading this right now.
And its probly boring. You can stop reading but read on if you want to. So yea kthnxbai.
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As no one has posted more criticism I will assume that I successfully found all the faults in my madman. Now for the things I liked about it:
Nice legs catch
Excellent pose
Smooth arm transfer
Flicking off the arm was amusing
Touched the ground with only feet and body parts
It's pleasing to know my judgement is this good already. More comments would be nice.
/ego
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Sep 8, 2008
haha the pose aint look epic, but nice ballance!
its a cool madman-replay
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