The first spin was pretty cool, it had a nice flare on it.
But not long after, you killed the flow and went pretty stiff I'd suggest relaxing some joints when going for a jump like that.
Landing was alright.
That manip hit, or whatever it was, was really basic and didn't get the job done, it didn't flow very good. But props for trying to even attempt a manip in -30, I know I probably wouldn't.
Kick was cool, and everything else was eh.
Try working on movement, if you want to become a nuthug or something you gotta start with movement :s