niiice lil bro...the run was sexay! (no homo) and the breakin was coo' to =]...i think you could have got better spins on those kick setups though :/....9/10
wanna spar? pm me =]
Good job with the initial running. Even though it was just one step it was better than 95% (if not more) of the running attempts I see nowadays. Your lumbars were in a awkward position but the overall shape of your tori was cool.
That semi-jump-kick thing at ~895 was a bit strange, but you probably missed that twichy movement and kept going which is hardly relevant anyways.
In this kind of replays were you don't touch Uke I usually prefer when people keep the movements in a straight line from the point were you started to the point where Uke stands, it shows a bit more of control over what you're doing, but it's just a personal preference and by no means a flaw.
Around 850 by the way you approached the ground I thought you were going to do somekind of clockwise flare or something like it, but unfortunately you didn't use the momentum of your left leg and lost your flow. The flare would have been a much better option in my opinion since it would fit perfectly with the 2000 you did afterwards as it's a combo that is done a lot in real life.
The rest of the replay was simple and neat so it doesn't leave me room for exhaustive commenting like the first part.
Oh, I forgot to say, watch that relaxed neck. The head going all wibblewobble looks kind of silly.
I'm really glad to see you improve this fast, you've got the potential to become one of the finest in realism. Keep it up.
(I linked the moves incase someone that's not into realism would like to know what you're doing.)
That semi-jump-kick thing at ~895 was a bit strange, but you probably missed that twichy movement and kept going which is hardly relevant anyways.
In this kind of replays were you don't touch Uke I usually prefer when people keep the movements in a straight line from the point were you started to the point where Uke stands, it shows a bit more of control over what you're doing, but it's just a personal preference and by no means a flaw.
Around 850 by the way you approached the ground I thought you were going to do somekind of clockwise flare or something like it, but unfortunately you didn't use the momentum of your left leg and lost your flow. The flare would have been a much better option in my opinion since it would fit perfectly with the 2000 you did afterwards as it's a combo that is done a lot in real life.
The rest of the replay was simple and neat so it doesn't leave me room for exhaustive commenting like the first part.
Oh, I forgot to say, watch that relaxed neck. The head going all wibblewobble looks kind of silly.
I'm really glad to see you improve this fast, you've got the potential to become one of the finest in realism. Keep it up.
(I linked the moves incase someone that's not into realism would like to know what you're doing.)
Last edited by Oblivion; Dec 23, 2010 at 04:10 AM.
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Oblivion: Thanks for the comment, ive noticed your comments really speak to people.
Back on to the subject im getting at, i took a look at that link you gave me for that 2000 Trick. I Remember you referring to that website one time and its quite useful. ill be using that more often but i followed up the whole trick and perfected it.
Back on to the subject im getting at, i took a look at that link you gave me for that 2000 Trick. I Remember you referring to that website one time and its quite useful. ill be using that more often but i followed up the whole trick and perfected it.
