Just recently picked up drawing again after years of inactivity.
Tips and CnC very welcome

Looks very nice, but the right elbow looks really weird in my opinion

The upper body looks pretty inproportionate compared to her legs. She's got like a really female torso and then there are just these massive bear legs coming out of nowhere.

Shading looks nice though. Not perfect, but it's that fact that makes it nice.

The left leg is a little thick compared to the right.

a few inconsistencies with the proportions and perspective, that will improve the more you draw, dont need to comment anymore on that.

face isnt great, the rest is ok.
linework needs work. line thickness and quality etc. smooth controlled lines, keep the pressure constant, use the outlines to start or end a shade, rather than outline everything, always keep the pencil sharp, stuff like that.

shading is over done imo, not a fan of it. dont be afraid to use the white of the paper, contrast is more important than shading ALL THE THINGS. a good pencil user can achieve the required depth with minimal effort, thats the whole idea, keep it soft.

other than that, its ok, nice work.

Thanks for the tips, it actually helped. I'll try to fix it up a bit
:)

also thank mr skeltal

I don't know a lot of thing in art, but i want to say that you make good job.