Toribash
The opener started off really good, but it got really stiff. You head was also really floppy. Either hold or extend your neck.
Then you jumped and stopped in midair. Try to jump forwards. That grab looked really bad because you had to pull yourself forward to uke.
Once you got the decap, you stayed completely stiff. You should try to move around so the replay doesn't get boring.
Also, try to make a pose that isn't supported by your hands. It will look better.

I didn't really point out the good things because this is quick cnc. Good job.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
well its a wip and i couldnt find a way to rotate my boday in the right direction to land on my feet without falling backwards.