Why did you make another thread like this? but well.. I have to post something there.
Yeah ur replay looks like a bit fail, I see that you can do skeets well, skeets and booms need patiency, and u have it, so u can do some booms too. In your replay, u grab a lot, u grab uke under almost the entire replay. Ur not stiff, but u should be a bit more destructive, like 2-3 dismembers in a kick, it would be beautiful.
Ur replay is 4.5/10 from me.