Hello all,
Never really done replays before except quick ones for fun.
But I got a few that I would like to show and get some tips on.

I'll just post one at a time so heres one I just gaveupon finished today.

Your smoothness are really good.
This would be nicer if it was a full DM.
Needs a bit work.
I really can't tell what, but it needs more.

8/10

Good job.

Ah yes, probably my openers fault there. Thanks.

Anyways I was working on this other one, I never got around to finishing it and probably won't unless I think of something good.

Feel free to edit it or give some suggestions.

Nice one, I really like the boom. I think it should be something like this...

Hm, don't really like your edit, the kick doesn't really give me any room for cool stuff.

I goofed with it for a while.

Was unable to get the legs dm'ed and am clueless as to what I should do now.

Ideas?


edit: Added new finishedish version, just a goofie one. Will change it tomorrow and start editting after the punch.


edit2:

A review of the finished version by Spartan094

[21:48] <&Spartan094> it's spinny
[21:48] <&Spartan094> ooooooooo
[21:48] <&Spartan094> i like that wiha hug
[21:48] <&Spartan094> cute dancing
[21:48] <&Spartan094> nice flip
[21:49] <&Spartan094> :o
[21:49] <&Spartan094> you stepped on uke
[21:49] <&Spartan094> another nice flip
[21:49] <&Spartan094> cool pose
[21:49] <&Spartan094> good balance
[21:49] <&Spartan094> 1/10

I'll try to get a bigger look into it tomorrow.
Btw, I like the chest DM.

Well, seeing as my previous C and C guy got banned, anyone else up to the task?

Also I got an old replay here, thinking of doing something like it again sometime.(only with a better opener and
less suck)

Have a looksie.

Im still here.

It was a bit messy.
Parts was flying everywhere.
It was hard to see what was happening.
But I heard alot of DMs.
Really good, the fluid was awesome.

9/10

- Hours

Thanks for the post Hours.

New replay

Colab with Jebus.

Not done, etc.

Might not get done etc.

C and C etc.

and so on.

I like it. It all flowed smoothly but then there is that big open space where you have to fall back down to uke. Maybe if when you do the decap, you grab to his upper body and try to get a boom with it to take up the free space you got there. Other than that, it was really nice. 8/10