As you read, can you pls critizise my replay?
And can you give me tips, what i can do better?
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Critiquing Headless idiot:

You did an interesting opener, looks a bit like an aikido snap kick but then you turned it into a sortof bicycle kick, it would of been semi decent if you extended the right knee and got a decap, but instead you got a pec dm, with your knee. Which looked pretty bad to be honest. Should of aimed it better and maybe instead of contracting both pecs, extended one and kept your arms more relaxed.

The rest of it are just generic dms, no hits or anything so nothing to comment on, but they are rather unexciting. Try to do a few hits or doing an all out madman.

The headthrow was also unnecessary and there is no pose.

Streetfight:

Too many hits and points delivered before the first dm. Semi-Unique ideas. If the remainder of uke that you pushed to the ground made his chest dm, it would of been cooler, again the head throw/grab looks messy and unnecessary. The whole thing was a bit stiff and lacked a certain flow and momentum, but the scramble over uke was kinda cool and if you got a few more dm's in and some clean hits it could of been pretty cool.


So as requested, there is your C and C.

Hope this helps.

Aaalright,

thank you
All i can say is:
I will do it better next time

I like the streetfight because of the last move you do to the head and the rounding hit is good.

I'm not really like the headless idiot because you decap uke with your two hand.

heres the grade, A and B

hmmm...it was a good replay, the headless idiot is nasty and the streetfight is very excellent move....


you got A and +A

Thank you ;)
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