Toribash
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Da cookeyemonstah!
I'm glad that I managed to get your attention.
So, I want to show some of my noobish replays to you.
Please, comment what should I improve.
P.S. I suck at giving titles to replays... :P
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vid1.rpl (246.0 KB, 13 views)
boom.rpl (241.1 KB, 13 views)
vid2.rpl (187.5 KB, 9 views)
yayrage.rpl (153.3 KB, 11 views)
vid5.rpl (366.5 KB, 11 views)
Last edited by Arthur; May 3, 2010 at 10:10 PM.
art board mods: if they dont understand it its not cnc
I have two comments:
You're pretty grabby, work on reducing grab. What really helps is just trying to make a few splitcaps without grabbing. Shouldn't be too hard and they are quite elegant.
You have close to no flow at all. Everything is either contracted or extended. This makes the replay feel jerky. Try to relax more, smooth up your movement.
Thanks for the Avatar, MrAakash
+ destruction

- no style, flow, ad idle limbs.

Work on using all of your limbs as whole instead just using your upper body while punching and just your lower body when kicking.
Thanks for the comments . I tried to improve my style and that's what i've got.
Edit: what should I improve?
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newone.rpl (281.9 KB, 5 views)
loo.rpl (178.6 KB, 6 views)
Last edited by Arthur; May 6, 2010 at 09:47 AM.
art board mods: if they dont understand it its not cnc