wow..
Instead of saying why this replay is bad and flaming, tell him how to improve or else he wont make better replays.
First off:
-very stiff, relax your joints more.
-Dont edit other peoples replays, make your own. Be creative with your ideas.
-Ignore want douchebags say here, work on it and you'll eventually be good
oh and one more, points do not matter =)