Overedit by me what you guys think? i think its an overedit...

Meh, not really an over edit, its just random masks all over the place. Over edits are flashes, effects like earthquakes, pulses. Good start though, just add more effects. Also, try to make your videos higher quality.

you should really work on that, there was no flow at all, everything in slowmotion? and if you use an overlay make sure to put the track on ADD

ok .-.

If you are going to make overedits, speed up your clips. It doesn't look very good a video with a dubstep song like that and such slow moves.

O:< You call this overedit? OO:
Really dude, first it's waaay to slow for overedit, here is no eyes-rape effects.
I saw only Koopz Glith, film burn, fire ring and few cuts.
Soo. some tips for overedits: Speed up your clip, add: soft contrast, gradient map, color correction(optiona), use invert colors, light's, lens flares, pan/crop effect for shake and cameraa moves and everything whaat you need for umm "impact"? moments in song.