Toribash
Original Post
My first attempt.. Not bad, I guess..
Title says all, I guess :/
Don't rate too harshly
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wow.rpl (24.9 KB, 12 views)
I'm not afraid to say anything.

So I'll say that this was the worst replay I've seen.

The opener had no detail at all. The split wasn't too bad, but you ignored almost every part of your body, except your shoulders and hips. The way you sat there in an ugly way was gross. Then you tried to catch the body, in a horrible form. Then a while after it lands on you, you try again. There wasn't anything interesting in the replay except a split. At the end of the replay, you started to fly away. This whole replay had to flow at all and wasn't very enjoyable to watch.

2/10
私の顔にそれを言う。
for your first replay is pretty nice, you used an straight old school opener with no rotation, with some basics you can do something more, i edited your replay, try to see what i did and what i changed and also try always to work with more relaxed joints, that will make the replay better and smoother
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wow-kradox edited.rpl (77.2 KB, 11 views)