way to be a dick about it, he was giving you a compliment
Opener was strange. It looked like you were going to do a scoot into a cork, but you did some odd trick with both knees completely bent. The hook out of the first trick looked a little awkward because the glutes were over extended. Second trick was also strange, but it was ok. 3rd kick was good, I like the cork except you put your foot down before you could fully rotate. Moon kick was nice, pose was nice.
Looks pretty good. The only thing i would say is that it was a little short and you could have added more tricks in. Also, i don't know how new you are at tricking, but throw some expert tricks in. But overall, it looks nice.