Some of the clips were so bright I couldn't see what was going on, of the clips I could see they were aight.

Also lowering the music volume at the sub-machine gun part felt off.

Keep improving bro, maybe we'll work on something ayy lmao

yeah syncs pretty nice but the pancrop is a bit stiff and lifeless like my dick on a Monday
Screen pumps and interesting camera angles and you win

Gunsounds too loud, was it really necessary to put it in a swish effect for every transition?
...the swoosh at 0:09 wasn't even needed



the only part I really liked was from 0:24 - 0:29

nice work

something that bothered me that probably shouldnt was that all the clips was capture the flag
the hud annoyed me

the only thing i found enjoyable to watch was the first 11 seconds

good work tho

That.

And I really liked the triple-shot thing you did at 0:13, the first 20 seconds were the best part of this.

Great job.
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The first 15*

you will not out weaboo me

ty I'll be thinking of what you said and how I can do better.

is too bright you cant even see the target almost. In these kinds of vid you need to show your talent, and dont go to far on the filters you need to still make the viewer see whats going on, its hard to see whats going on in the first 14 seconds.


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PS.sry for my bad english