Hello, this is my first texture. i have some background in art i started scetching this grill like a week ago and worked up to making it a head. im no good at hair so i just made her a fur hoody i might change it though
THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Please leave me some feedback on what you think also any tips you can give me would be great, thanks

Lets get this straight.
First of all, when you're trying to draw something realistic, forget about the black lines. No black lines.

The main thing after no black lines is the colouring is the so called shading.
Usually people start off from a black/white drawing as a scetch, after that they add colour to it.
I like doing it like that, for example.

After that I start shading the whole thing, with different tones of grey.
And as a finish - colouring.

Thanks for the great advice im going to try and get back into Drawing with Photoshop, Witch means i need to buy an new drawing tablet because i gave my old roommate my old one. But annyway i think ill just keep this head like this and start to get into drawing Flat pictures. i may come back to making toribash art after i get back into the swing of it.

i belive the nose is "long" and eyes are high and abit far from middle and lips are low try to fix that

The mouth looks a bit low, the mask doesn't look too great and I think you should try something different maybe.
Even know the mouth looks a bit low and I think you should sort that. Everything looks fine.