Thorn
Thorn
well for one u are way better than i was.
K DOWN TO THE CRITISICM!!
1= i didnt rly like it when you hit uke and nothing happens.
2= the grabs were'nt a big issue but it still made the replay just slightly less appealing.My rule of thumb is this''no grabbing for more than 3 sec. and no more than 4 grabs, unless the grabs are r booms or rips''
3= didnt hav that flare like mosier or rutz has. you can fix this by adding named moves like booms, rips, splits, punches and etc...
4= i didnt like how while attacking uke you forgot to fix your positioning like how you were crawling during the last few frames.remember to watch you footing while still doing uke damage.
5= last of all speed. try using your chest and pecs to add momentum. ill teach you a little math equation bout how replays are; speed=momentum+positioning=dms= higher quality replays
so thats bout it remember to use these tips