Its not bot i really like it, But the city behind it should have some parts un mapped, Like some big cities or the montains should be very visible, if not TO VISIBLE
Its so, just my sketch for a mural job.
Im posting it to get tb feedback, on the composition . Downer you think its a finished digital picture tho, lol.
thnx anyways uall !
[WAPOW] "uhhh......no, Commissar we cant be sure yet _but it looks like he was killed by a hazelblunt object"
:d I did graffity for severals years before i quitted cause of the cost and some legal issues :d
anyway.... this stuff doesnt tell me much... I was mostly doing calligraphic graffiti with some add around.. without a really complex background.
I dont like that flat text, font, the line in the middle and that red color.
The city look to far... doing that on a wall... unless you get plenty of space you will have problem with this sorta of dettails of lights... and doing that blurry will just end in a mess.
Less black on that guy... it make the immage too heavy
composition lacks alot, 90% is just background, with the focal being almost off the page
text is annoying
colours dont follow any scheme or plan, brown red black white blue, thats alot going on