What DesertPunk means is that you are using hold joints. Relax moves - moves where a large fraction of your joints are relaxed at any one time - are often more accepted on this board. Relax moves can take a ridiculously long time to get good at, but if you're interested in making singleplayer replays then they're a worthwhile time investment.
More importantly, the replays themselves. The main problem here is that you're using symmetrical moves. Some asymmetrical movement can help wonders - watch my edit of your second move, which took me less than two minutes to create, to see what I mean.
Keep practising.
More importantly, the replays themselves. The main problem here is that you're using symmetrical moves. Some asymmetrical movement can help wonders - watch my edit of your second move, which took me less than two minutes to create, to see what I mean.
Keep practising.
Last edited by 3vi1; Apr 2, 2008 at 08:11 PM.
"Call yourself alive? I promise you you'll be deafened by dust falling on the furniture,
you'll feel your eyebrows turning to two gashes, and your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings."
you'll feel your eyebrows turning to two gashes, and your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings."
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