Drew this in art today. Still needs some work.

Wutchoo think?

need's a deeper crack

Yeah...err. JFK.

So. I reckon it's pretty boss. Better than anything that I could ever do.

Maybe a little boring though. Colour would be nice.

Well its for drawing class, so I'm just allowed to use graphite.

Thats so cool..
its looks realistic

nice but hes right the crack does need to be deeper and you dont need graphite for it juts make a shadow to make it look deeper

It could use more depth. Try making your darks darker, and your whites whiter (erase or preserve the white).

yeah, a big part of that is the shitty lighting in my dorm. but i've been working on it a bit, maybe i'l take another pic when its done.

very very good

The crack doesn't look that good,needs more perspective...or idk ._o
Also,the eye itself is badass !