here u go

heres some more

ok, watched the first 5, and I noticed you had a binch of no-noes:

1. they're too stiff. soz man
2. one is completely symmetrical (in terms of movements). that's fail.
3. you kept an unintentional self DM.
4. you double-posted.

you're closer than most who post their first replays, but still, you shouldn't be doing this yet.

thanks fer the advice ill try harder