how can i improve?
the name has to do with my clan's video we're workin on

Too stiff, slow, and short.
Improvements ?

More relaxed, faster and longer.

Being relaxed is the most important though

You want advice on learning to breakdance? Play wushu. It helps you to learn to move fluidly at a single target, which in turn will help you with dancing.

Don't just turn on toribash and go "Well. Time to make an epic replay in five minutes". It doesn't work like that, you have to keep adding on. Keep learning.

For now, just focus on loosening up, it helps a lot.

Go here and watch those replays.

dude mainly just keep it loosey goosey... then contract more instead of being all extend... just be relaxed is what im saying i guess so yeah... nice btw it works its good and.... thats it